Finally you made it. I have nothing to add in here.
Keep it up
you are improving a lot :3
OK... could improve a lot
well you are improving but here are some things I consider "flaws"
you build up your background too slow.. it gets tedious.
you need better instruments, I was totally expecting a lower bass with more power
There is no melody ?
using out tune instruments is always a bad idea if you are going to use them with other propose than effects.
get 8bit instruments and this could be a very good start for one of that 8bit songs.
4 minutes is too long for hearing the same again and again.
the idea was .. ok.
the main concept was ok. the main tone is fine I guess but the low response x_x
wrong chords to pick. those are tension off chord progression tones which are not really pleasant for the ears in abuse.
truth. thx gogo
unnesesary fill up
Instead of repeating the same line again and again in the intro you could have shortened it.
Other point. there is something missing. I can tell you what is missing. there is no melody, pretty much this is only a background of harmonics which repeats again and again.
it is .. so so . I'm giving it a 6 because it is a start... it not bad but is not complete.
I agree with you gogo, thx for the advise :)
But kinda sounds incomplete ...
sounds kinda empty in some parts but still is nice.
also... drops I a little too long for my like xP
and by the end it gets too much echo and becomes kinda noisy.
Its good in some parts and bad in other parts
intro is too noisy , though you wanted to achieve the broken radio effect its jsut too annoying, then its like ok but still noisy, when the noise shuts up it becomes nice to the ears like at 1 :50 and starting at 2:00 , you gotta love it, I love that lead
but then it starts an overdrive that kills the mood at the ending 2:34
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